We are the My-Therious G!
Translator: HowlingWolf_HWNJ
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[My-TheriousG] Kamen Rider My-Th - 09.mkv (724.2 MiB)
Thank you for your work. Though this very clearly still needs more time in the oven. I'm glad to see you have more hands on deck now but there's still a lot of obvious mistakes and very strange wordings. I suggest you take a bit more time ironing out the details before you ship these out
Wishing y'all the best
It would be helpful if, from time to time, people pointed out what those "obvious mistakes" and "very strange wordings" are, so that I could learn from them and avoid making them again.
Anyway, thanks for checking out my translation. I really try to put in as much effort as I can.
No problem, hang in there.
And those mistakes, with all due respect, is for you and your team to figure out :)
But here's a couple I found this episode,
- 10:32 "What happened to his face?" (Yuna is talking directly to Tatsuomi. It should be 'your face')
- 10:34 "It was an oversight." (The word 'oversight' doesn't quite work in this context)
- 15:22 "Sae and you go back." (Since she's referring to Sae directly first, instead of 'Sae and you' it should be either 'You two', 'You and your brother' or something along those lines)
- 18:14 "Can't they come back?" (This is Otosumi expressing shock at what Tigre just said. It should be 'They can't come back?')
- 20:41 "I don't care about the damn justice!" (Awkward wording. You don't need 'the' in that line)
- 20:59 "This was the most fun I'd had fighting in ages." (Grammar mistake. It should be 'I've had')
- 21:41 "Stop messing with my things!" (Just confusing. What is 'my things' supposed to refer to here?)
- 22:30 "We failed our promised." (Typo. But also an awkward phrasing. You don't 'fail a promise'. It's usually 'fail to keep a promise')
- Also you're consistently gendering the monster using he/him pronouns. While it's not outright wrong, it just feels off when the monster is more akin to an animal
There are other mistakes but they'd require more from me to fully explain. I will just leave you with these. Good luck with future episodes
I know the mistakes are for out team to figure out, but I pointed before that, from time to time, it would be nice to know which errors I made.
Regarding 15:22, I had my doubts on how to translate that one since "Sae" is mentioned and I do not like to skip them as most translators do, but, yeah, it sounds weird because she’s referring to Sae directly. I will go with "Sae, you two go back."
20:41, I will go with "I don't give a damn about justice!"
21:41, That line was weird because I was trying to say it the way we say it in my mother tongue, "deja de meterte en mis cosas". We don't refer to us in first person de as in "Stop messing with me". Instead, we go with "the things we do". I will go with "Stop messing with me!"
22:30 was mentioned in the QC channel after the episode was published, as well as 23:26, where a "?" is missing.
I will also change 10:32, 10:34, 20:59 to what you recommended.
Thanks for pointing these out!
A new subtitle will be uploaded in our server with these changes.
I have plans to, in the future, release a batch with properly polished subtitles.
I'm seriously doing my best to improve.
Hi, I am very glad that we have people trying to put out English subs for My-Th in a timely manner. But in a previous statement in another community, you said you knew of a group that was doing PROPER English subs in case us at EternalCheeser was MTL. I know you were referring to yourself, and I have to be honest: your English skills are not competent enough to be doing weekly releases. No matter how much you get quality checked by the public, you, yourself— are not improving. Your mistakes are the same every time, and it’s clear you’re sticking to the ‘literal translation is as close to Japanese as possible’ mindset. That mindset doesn’t work with your English skills.
You’ve also said you don’t really care for competition in your own server, yet you feel serotonin boosts and satisfaction by releasing subpar work first?
Do better, I think you should reflect on why you’re doing what you’re doing.
[MTL Statement + Proper Subgroup](https://imgur.com/a/4SHZ6Pd)
[Serotonin and First Objective](https://imgur.com/a/pD4U27C)
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